Thursday, October 3, 2013

Lauren W.- Crit 3- Passion













8 comments:

  1. I could feel a story through your photographs that started off weary and then got brighter. The clock on the wall and the beautiful colorful door frames are my favorite. The elements of the photo work together

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  2. Number three has a great perspective, the way the light is being twisted and not perfect. Also number 4, and I agree with above you start really grungy and basement feel, then the feet on the floor almost lead you out of it into the upstairs and to outside, very cool.

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  3. You have a lot of great shots, the door frame has a cool color to it, and I like the use of older objects with a rustic feel to them like the clock photo.

    Vote #7 - Very cool perspective

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  4. I really like picture #1, the green grass contrasts nicely with the black of the sky and white of the light. It has a good deal of mystery because it makes me wonder what is happening beyond the view-able frame. Reminds me of being outside at night during high school for a football game or something like that.

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  5. I'm always for simplicity, so I vote for pic #8 (the heel on the floor). Although it has great simplicity, I makes me wonder where the person is walking toward. It looks dark and scary wherever they're going. I also think you got the lighting to hit the subject perfectly.

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  6. Number 8 is my favorite for the week. I love the tonality and contrast in light and dark. It's also eerie, the subject looks like they are almost running into the darkness.

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  7. I love number 8. The subject is a great find!

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