Sunday, October 6, 2013

Jake - Passion Critique 3


















9 comments:

  1. Together your photos feel like a journey you are taking the viewers on involving milestones in your life. You allow the viewer into the space with the addition of your feet in the last few images. For some I wish they were less saturated to further progress this emotional connection I make with this set of photos. They add an individualistic touch to you as an artist but detach me because they appear dreamlike at times.

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  2. Nice, feels like a travel log, like how the start has this void of people, empty chairs, don't see people in the car, then all of a sudden there are pictures of your feet. My favorite is the second one.

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  3. Hey man. So on the whole, I really love how saturated all the colors are. My favorite is the 4th, the private property sign. It is so bright and vibrant for some reason it makes me think of a sunday morning comic strip. With the sun poking in through the clouds and the amount of unspoiled land, that somebody apparently owns it's almost making some kind of statement, like "You can't own land, man" or some hippie stuff like that. Nice. Finally I can't not comment on the last picture because those textures in the rocks and sea are badass.

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  4. Hi jake! The colors in all of these are absolutely fantastic! I like the theme in the last four photos of showing your feet in different settings. However, I can't choose between 10 and 11 for my favorite photos. The light in 10 is really cool, especially with that orb in the bottom, and I love the colors and depth in 11.

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  5. Overall your collection was one of the best this week. Great use of the filters and I like the saturating level of color. Your photos convey a feeling of simplicity and natural beauty, and your processing techniques (and choice of subjects) make it tough to pin down a time/era for the pics (some look at though they couldn't been taken today or 4 years ago).

    #1 was my favorite

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  6. Since it is fall, #9 has a great autumn feel which I think works great for this time of year. It isn't cliche either. The station wagon in the background kind of gives a sense of adventure.

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  7. I love number 11. The framing of the photo is incredible, but it also frames the ground down below. It's a great contrast between colors and textures.

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