Thursday, October 17, 2013

Lauren W.- Crit 4- Vintage/Memory



















9 comments:

  1. Hey Lauren!

    I really like your choice to take memory literal. My favorite photo is the second one. For a personal reason, living off the 7S exit brings out a memory for me. But the window reflection really makes it a vintage/memory feel. Every one can relate to a car ride and seeing that final exit. The subject is really nice and I think you executed it well. Awesome job!

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  2. Did quite a lot through glass, whih is difficult with reflections. The photo of a vintage photo would be really cool, but that reflection takes up almost half of the image. My favorite if number 7. A lot of highlights and shadows give good mood and depth to the image.

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  3. My vote is for 9. I actually quite enjoy the reflection of the candy through the window. The candy on top, then the reflection on the trees and the cookies on the bottom. It is like a memory sandwich.

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  4. Number 7 seems to have blacks, whites, and subtle grays in all the right places for a great composition. Lighting like many great photographs worked as your best friend. I saw a lot of great patterns throughout your photos.

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  5. I love #7, I think that one has a great narrative behind it and the contrast is really working here too.

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  6. #7 is my favorite. The lighting is wonderful and gives the piece a lot of depth.

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  7. Number 4 is my favorite. It's like a sweet preservation of an old memory. It makes you think and it makes you wonder.

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