Wednesday, October 30, 2013

Joshua Feo - Crit 4 - Vintage/Memory

































10 comments:

  1. My favorite of yours was 11. Use of lighting in this was good that it was filling in everywhere like the others. It stuck out.

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  2. I like how a lot of these are fuzzy. It seems to capture how a memory seems in our head: soft and not very clear at times. My favorite is number 3.

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  3. #4 is my favorite. I like the abstract nature of the shot and the different textures. Like other commenters, I also get the sense that you wanted to convey the fuzziness of fleeting memories with the unfocused shots. I think it is an interesting concept that not many other people in this class (if any) tried to tackle. for me, looking at the set as a whole provides a strange and muddled dream-like experience.

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  4. I really like the use of color in a lot of your shots. They're all sort of a soft pastel. I think #10 feels a bit out of place among-st these, but I really like the mysteriousness of that shot. That one is my favorite, I think.

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  5. #12 is my favorite for the week. I love the use of light and shadow. It gives the piece more depth and also a mysterious feel. I could definitely see this space as a memory of someplace.

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  6. Number 11 is my favorite, it reminds me of a still from a movie. Your use of shadow gives it an eerie, and yet still alluring feel.

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  7. You represent vintage and memory very well in this set. If I had to pick a favorite it would be number 11. I agree with Jessica in the comment above, it looks like it is from a movie. Hard dark shadows against a patterned wall looks great.

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  8. Number 14 is definitely my favorite.

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