Sunday, October 20, 2013

Jamie - Vintage/Memory - Crit 4




















8 comments:

  1. Number 2. Those giraffes just sink into that background. Takes a second to even realize they are there. A lot of good old timey things to help the vintage look

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  2. I love that you've showed a personal history through these photos. It seems like almost "A Day in the Life of Jamie" kind of collection. The 6th photo is extremely successful, to the point that I looked through your pictures yesterday, and was still thinking about it today. The composition of the older couple in the foreground and the focus onto the marriage ceremony with the younger couple is subtle but really paints a portrait of relationships and the history of them through memory. The tone of the photo, maybe captured by a filter, is really nice, adding a vintage and antique feel with the yellows, it almost looks like a polaroid.

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  3. photo 6 is my vote. That is an awesome composition. The older couple on either side of the newly married couple is an incredible concept i love it!

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  4. My favorite is #2. I really like the composition and the way the shadows fall in the bottom of the frame. I'll agree that these photos do seem very personal. These photos definitely connect with the memory theme. The recurring pumpkin imagery and the beautiful landscapes gives me the sense that you have many fond memories that relate to autumn. I also think the lack of saturation in some of the photos works very well to convey that vintage/memory feel.

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  5. #2 is my favorite this week. The shadows are beautiful at the bottom of the piece. My eye goes immediately to them.

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