Monday, September 9, 2013

Lauren W- b&w- Critique 1














16 comments:

  1. Love the bicycle photo. It seems fun and quirky and describes a certain subculture of Philadelphia quite well.

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  2. I loved your fourth photo. You managed to capture a perspective of the flooring that made it look like a door. I don't know if that was intentional or not, but it's a great use of spacial illusion. I also love your sixth photo. Capturing the lit strand of lights like that really enhanced the emotion of the photo. It added a tremendous depth to what otherwise would have been viewed as a mysterious dark house.

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  3. My favorite is the flooring one. It gives a nice pattern and rhythm to the image. A different perspective compared to just walking on it and looking forward. using something that usually carries you deeper into a space and show it as a flat space.

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  4. I love the eerie house photo. It took me a few moments to decipher what it was, and I enjoy photograph that can keep my attention in this time where everything is so easily scrolled past.

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  5. I love the picture of the hospital hallway, doing it in the B&W greyscale add the erie feeling to the entire picture and goes hand in hand with the emotions one usually gets in hospitals. That, cold and almost "outer body" experience many people have when something really upsetting happens.

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